Today’s Friday Poetry is brought to you by Ruman Hafsa.
Ruman Hafsa is a 20 year old student, studying Pharmacy. She is currently in his 3rd year! Ruman lives in India. Her motto is, “A rhythm of poetry is not just the rhyming of words, but the inner voice of poet’s heart.”
Here is her poem his titled I wonder.
I Wonder…
I wonder what these clouds are
A veil or an illusion
Concealing away the blinking stars
Fading away the moon & sun
I wonder where the birds fly to
And where do they come from
Soaring together
I wonder what do they hum
I wonder what the lightening is
Welding the broken sky somewhere?
And what is the thunderous noise I hark
Dacoits firing guns in some affair?
I wonder who painted the sky blue
And who puts the rainbow there
Where the sun sleeps at night
And who blows the vibrant air
I wonder these things & many more
But do not have innuendo to
I ask them about it, they say “don’t know”
I don’t fathom how to solve without a clue…
© by Ruman Hafsa
So I’d like to take a minute and thank Ruman for her poem. For me, it is very moving! I truly do appreciate her letting me use it.
Follow her on Google Plus account here, Ruman Hafsa, click on her name. Visit her there for more of her awesome poems.
So what do you think? Like it? Love it? Or dislike it?
Thanks a lot Miranda for posting my work here. I really appreciate it from the bottom of my heart… 🙂
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You are so welcome! Thanks for letting me publish it!
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My pleasure 🙂
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What a lovely poem. I imagine to be read by a child whose heads and hearts are filled witg so much innocent wonder.
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She does amazing work, hoping she will share some more of her work with me so I can share with yall…I’m so glad dyou enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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What a lovely poem! I particularly enjoy the imagery of lightening welding the sky, really beautiful.
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Thanks, I love the imagery also! She does amazing work. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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This is such a beautiful piece! Ruman Hafsa is amazing!
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I agree. It just struck a nerve with me. I am so glad she let me share it. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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I think it is a lovely poem. I enjoyed reading it.
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Thanks, she has tons more of her work on her Google Plus account. Feel free to stop by there to read more of her poems, thanks for reading and commenting!
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Thank you for the beautiful poem, Ruman. I love the imagery.
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I do too! She is talented for her age, that’s for sure. I wished I had half her talent. I’d love to write poetry but I just don’t have the knack for it…. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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She has some other amazing work posted on her Google +. Stop by there for some more of her other work…I love the imagery also, thanks for reading and commenting!
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Beautiful work! Tempted to write it down and hang it above my desk.. Thanks so much for sharing!
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this is wonderful. You can see so much talent here in this poem!
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Thanks, it is an amazing insight for me! There are so many more things that we fail to notice….things as simple as the passing clouds, sounds of thunder, and and so many others. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Lovely poem! It reminds me of a curious child asking questions about its surroundings, and always hear ‘i don’t know’ as the answer.
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That was my interpretation also, I love her wording here! Curiosity is such a great thing! Oh, only to be little again…Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Lovely poem! It made me look to God with thanks, which is always a good thing.
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Thanks, I’m very impressed as well! She has several others that are amazing also. Check out her Google Plus! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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What a great post. Thoroughly enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing..
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Thanks! I am so glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading!
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I wonder… its beautiful. Its so apropos to the wonder that is a kids imagination.
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I know, my toddler is in the “Why?” stage…..everything is why? The answers are usually never easy, but the reality is that they just want you to talk to them!! It’s hard, I will admit that. But I try to carry out full on conversations with all my kids. We don’t do simple or easy here, we homeschool so every question is usually answered via a Google search and other forms of research. They learn throug doing, not just by telling them some basic generic answer….Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Beautiful! I always look at the clouds and wonder what they are. Looking through a kids imagination is a wonderful thing 🙂
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I especially like thunderstorms, as long as I’m inside though. Cause it’s scary to be stuck outside in a thunderstorm, but back to what I was saying….the sounds of thunder amaze me. It’s so loud and overpowering! Reminds me that there are bigger things out there…I also enjoy the night sky. Kids are so inquisitive! Thanks for reading and commenting!
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Wow this was amazing. Such a lovely poem!
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Thanks for sharing your feedback! She does making work, her Google + has lots more. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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This poem tells us that the wonders of God are beyond our understanding. A lot of mysterious things that even the great scientist can’t answer. It also reminds us that there is no one powerful than the living God. Lovely poem, very inspiring.
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Well said…& thanks for stopping by
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You are so right, there are wonders of the world no one will ever be able to explain. I appreciate you stopping by! Thanks
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It is a really beautiful poem. The imagery is very powerful!
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I agree, thanks for stopping by!
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What a wonderful poem. It shows she is multi talented if she is able to study pharmacy but can still write poetry like this. It’s good to be well rounded.
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I totally agree, she is a true gem! She has talent beyond her years in my opinion. Hoping to have another poem from her soon…Thanks for stopping by!
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I love that it’s all about nature and her surroundings. It’s such a lovely poem, it’s heartfelt and it’s going to make you wonder as well.
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Some scholars believe that the art of poetry may predate literacy. Others, however, suggest that poetry did not necessarily predate writing. By the way, this poem is great! 🙂
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